Film Review Changes

 After review from my mother, I had some ideas on how to improve my opening sequence. I remember that she stressed about two critical factors, the lighting and stability of the camera. As previously mentioned, I had set up my the tripod, using it to its entire functionality. This included the spherical gimbal, built-in level, and the flexible legs. I then switched from using the open blinds and the nightlights, to a large floodlight and the overhead. This way, I could simulate daytime and nighttime regardless of the actual time during filming. This came in especially handy on days I would be up late working or times when I would be at school. After her criticism I scrapped all of the footage I had. To be fair, I did not have much progress and its poor quality would affect it in the near future. For example, having to consistently cut, fade, and dissolve would make the video appear even grainier. The effects were overlooked in my prior productions. Next, I decided to ditch my previous script altogether. As of now, I am going to improvise all of my dialogue. However, even after this drastic change, I don't think it will be difficult to manage. I can find unscripted ways to add humor or extra emotion that I wouldn't be able to write ahead of time. Doing this gives the most "natural" feel. Finally, I have used the storyboard as an "inspiration". Considering I would have to cut or shorten shots, I figured that I could find new angles to satisfy the requirements, while still retaining the original subject listed. For example, instead of the standard long shot of a messy desk, I could have a pan. This will satisfy the condition and add more variety in the unique motion and detail.